Year 4 get a very special visitor!

This week in Writers Workshop Year 4 wrote their own version of ‘The Hare and the Tortoise’.
They could choose any speedy animal that they wished such as a cheetah, Rhino or an eagle but they had to include the tortoise.

To help us describe the tortoise Miss Martindale bought her per tortoise to school to visit for the day.
How would you describe George? How did he move? What was his shell like?
Did you enjoy meeting him?
Would you like to see George again?

What ‘wow words’ did you use this week? Please share them here so that others can learn these words too.

Advertisements

23 Responses so far »

  1. 1

    ayesha 4m said,

    i would love to see George again

  2. 3

    Kimran said,

    He was so cute. He is is the second tortoise I have held. Here are some sentences to describe him:

    George ploddeded along strecthing his minature, scaly legs. His hard shell was surprising smooth. Tiny claws are not making any diifrence to how lovely it feels to have him crawl all over your hand.

  3. 4

    Simran 5dk said,

    Nice tortoise Miss Martindale.

  4. 5

    Riya said,

    Geroge was adorable.Thankyou Miss Martindale for bringing him in.I really got an idea of what I would write in writers workshop.

  5. 6

    Ayesha 4M said,

    Kimran she is a girl not a boy you put he

  6. 7

    Ayesha- I made that mistake too. I t is because when we first got George we thought she was a boy and now I just can’t stop calling her ‘him’. So it is MY FAULT!
    Miss Martindale

  7. 8

    Riya said,

    Is she called Georgina?Because maby you might call herGeroge for short.It’s not really your fault Miss Martindale.

  8. 9

    Yes Riya- she is Georgina but George for short.

  9. 10

    Riya said,

    It is a spectacular slide-show!

  10. 11

    Riya said,

    I had a great time writing a fable.I hope I’m a goal scorer!

  11. 12

    Oceane said,

    I absolutely love george she is so cute! You are really lucky to have her and thank you for bringing her in.

  12. 13

    Kimran said,

    Opps I keep forgeting.

  13. 14

    Riya 4m said,

    It’s ok Kimran.I sometimes forget aswell.

  14. 15

    paige 3J said,

    George look`s cute.

  15. 16

    ayesha 4m said,

    Don’t worry Miss Martindale some times it happens.

  16. 17

    Actually Ayesha- that is an important message. Everybody makes mistakes! (Remember I say I am nearly perfect but not quite! That is a joke)

  17. 18

    Riya said,

    Nobodys perfect.Even Scientist make mistakes!

  18. 19

    hajra4m said,

    I liked seeing George he was so so cute thank you Miss Martindale for bringing her in. we really injoyed it.

  19. 20

    I hope we can have George again because he was tickly in your hand.

  20. 21

    Tanvir said,

    George was so cute. But he was very slow at crawling around. She’s quiet prickly and scaly on his shell. I wish you can bring him in again Miss Martindale.

  21. 22

    Anisa siddhu 4g said,

    I wish I was there shame I was ill.

  22. 23

    shannon Year 3 said,

    Goerge looks soooooo cuuuuuuuuuuuut


Comment RSS · TrackBack URI

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s

%d bloggers like this: