Avatar story- Mya

Imagine a world where picturesque, exquisite plants are almost as tall as buildings.
Well if you enjoy thinking about this strange, bizarre adventure listen carefully as I begin my story.
It all started when I was wondering about trying to find my way around.
“Excuse me I’m Clare, Tom’s sister, could you please show me where the BYN laboratory is to Pandora?” I politely asked.
An old lady scruntinized and replied in a croaky voice “Down the hall and on your right”.
I thanked her and continued my intriguing journey on my wheel chair unfortunatly.
As I arrived in the lab I met the cruel, savage manager who made me feel so pointless. I knew she was only doing her job and trying to make money however there was something about her that I didn’t like.
In about a few minutes time I had learnt that there was a captivating, shimmering stone in a world called Pandora that costs a fortune. My job was to travel to Pandora in a hi-tech machine and return that stone back to where it belongs (the BYN labatory).
Feeling courageous I stepped out of my wheel-chair and lay down in a cramped cage, shut my eyes and began my engrossing adventure…
Chapter 2
Intrepidly I awoke and gently rubbed my bleary eyes. Although it usually takes me a while to get up I jumped strait out of my scientific cage and out into the Pandora world.
Feeling adventurous I swooshed my bright yellow tail and set out to explore. I saw mountains of trees towering above me, a sky blue ground below me and a deafening screech in the distance.
What was that awful noise? On the inside I felt ever so terrified but on the outside I payed a bold smile upon my face. A few seconds later all was silence. An absorbing silence. A while later I heard footsteps coming towards me.
At the glimpse of an eye I saw two pale brown horns beside me…
I calmly turned my body to face the beast and noticed this unusual creature had dark red skin which glowed in the sunlight. Feeling slightly more courageous I quietly muttered
“Err, Hi my name’s Clare, what’s your name?
“RAHHHHHHHHH”! The creature angrily replied.
Never before have I been so petrified in my life, I knew there was only one option: RUN!

Chapter 3
Unfortunately my plan had failed, it was even worse now because I was being chased by beast!
GOSH! my footsteps felt tiny compared to the stomping of the beast!
Fortunatly as I ran for my life! I came across another young avatar named John who spoke to the aggressive beast in his language. Responsibly the savage, boisterous beast listened to John and calmly sat.

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15 Responses so far »

  1. 1

    Zara said,

    Mya I think your avatar sory is amazing. You have used lots of wow words like: picturesque exquisite intriguing and many more. Make sure your sentences make sense.

  2. 2

    hammaad said,

    i like your wow words

  3. 3

    mya said,

    Thank you Zara and Hammaad, I hope you liked it.

  4. 5

    emiliana :) said,

    i like your avater story 🙂

  5. 7

    shannon said,

    Zara your right mya did use loads of wow words i think we should put them on the wow word wall.

  6. 8

    karolina said,

    i really loved reading this story i think it is fab i loved your wow words you used.

  7. 9

    karolina said,

    i really love this story i think i couldent do better with my sory. star: i really love your wow words wish: you are using the dame punctuation a bit more. Any way your work is fab i love it i think you have tryed really hard on it.

  8. 10

    Noorulain said,

    I think it is really good Mya. 🙂

  9. 11

    karolina said,

    I really loved reading this piece of work i think other people enjoyed it aswell. I think you have tryed really hard and enjoyed it. this is a great story.

  10. 12

    karolina said,

    This is amazing i think i love it and i would like to know some of the wow words you used please wont you mind Mya.

  11. 13

    PAIGE! said,

    I think your wow words a brilliant!!!!! like exquisite, picturesque courageous Wow Mya your story is so phenomal!!!! 🙂 😛

  12. 14

    ky ky harte said,

    that was wickid mya and i will raed it again 😀 🙂

  13. 15

    ky ky harte said,

    and karolina i agree whith you


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