Please read Karolina’s report from Writers Workshop this week. Tell her what impresses you about the report and give her some pointers to help her improve.
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Zara said,
July 6, 2011 @ 6:42 pm
I really enjoyed reading your story you have used alot of detail. Well done!!!! 🙂 😀 🙂 😉 😦
Aiza said,
July 6, 2011 @ 6:47 pm
i agree with you zara it had some details i liked it well done karolina
Aiza said,
July 6, 2011 @ 6:47 pm
well done karolina itwas great i enjoyed it
Aiza said,
July 6, 2011 @ 6:50 pm
:-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-)
year5atbearwood said,
July 6, 2011 @ 6:50 pm
Why don’t you comment on the voicethread itself?
Aiza said,
July 6, 2011 @ 6:54 pm
i loved reading your report
mya said,
July 6, 2011 @ 7:48 pm
Yes Karolinas news report is very interesting, she put a lot of effort in.
shawon said,
July 6, 2011 @ 7:59 pm
I enjoyed reading your newspaper report Karolina.
PAIGE! said,
July 7, 2011 @ 12:03 pm
Well Done Karolina this is really intreasting and fab!!!!!
karolina said,
July 7, 2011 @ 3:02 pm
Thank you for all your comments they are great i really enjoyed reading them. I am sure your stories are fab as well.
mya said,
July 9, 2011 @ 12:16 pm
Well done Karolina, you tried really hard.
aiza said,
July 14, 2011 @ 12:16 pm
i agree with you mya you are right :-):-):-):-)